Tag: Writing

The owl that became a story

Mrs Anderson read us the book ‘First Flight’ by June Crebbin. We talked about the narrators point of view and used a Gemini Gem to prompt us to think more deeply about what the story might look like when told in the first person.

Every single morning in the glimmering sun there was once an owl who always wanted to learn on how to fly, every time he asked for permission from his mother she always denies it, the reason why she denied it because the entire flock of owls are nocturnal ( Meaning that they are not use to the mornings )  

As the sun finally hid behind the mountains and the shadows grew long, the moon climbed into the sky. This was the signal for the night to begin! The parliament of owls woke up, and their hoots echoed through the trees as they shared the secrets of the dark.

While it was still pitch black ! The parliament of owls woke up and hooted through the trees. But as I tried to fly, the wind became too strong for my small wings. I lost the other owls  in the dark and had to land on a branch to catch my breath.

I gave my loudest owl call, hoping my mother would find me. I was so far from our home tree that I was scared she couldn’t hear me. It was pitch black, and I knew my mother would be growing worried that I was lost in the shadows.

When it was morning and my energy was great , I used all my power source to fly in the direction I was coming from when I left. 

 

The first hour had passed and half of my energy was drained. I was really exhausted and wanted to sit in the shade of a nearby tree, but my gut was telling me to keep on going and don’t stop. When it was night I heard a callout saying my name. I thought I was hallucinating but when I lookedI looked in the distance, i could see my mother standing on a tree branch looking shocked that i made it ou there alive. It is important to listen and pay attention to what you dont know where your going or up tos

Anne Frank – The Annex

For this week of writing, I have learnt about the terrible story of Anne Frank and her life in the annex.

I first needed to learn about what the annex was, who was Anne Frank, and why was she so important? My teacher had given us a website that gave us a visual website of the annex. It was a small little back house that fit 7 people but was probaly meant for about 2, 3 max. It was behind a business office that was covered in Nazi soilders.

I read the information that was connected to each object. I found out that  That Anne Frank wa to scead to get a glass of wate

 

Pourquoi story – why Maungerei sleeps

 


For this task I created a Pourquoi story to tell us why does Maungerei sleeps. This is my story why Maungerei sleeps.

Back, far back, in the mists of time when the world was very young there was a mountain named  Maungarei, . She was beautiful to look at but known by all for her really bad temper. She woke up. As she was angry at the dinosaurs when they were dancing. Then the ground started  shaking, Maungarei had!! “Erupted, said nefai”. Her anger was seen by all, a violent explosion with an ash cloud shaped like a mushroom. As soon as Maungarei was still mad, all the other Mountains and dinosaurs were so scared that they needed to take cover .

 

After hours had passed, Maungarei had a wish from one of the gods that she had used it on. To come herself down as she was. Tired of  what she caused. She slowly fell asleep and  other volcanoes were coming closer but not too close so Maungarei didn’t wake up and get’s mad again. 

 

Over time Moungari is resting the land that used  to be pretty. But after the eruptions it is just like lava everywhere. The lava is still cooling down but as Moungari still has ashes coming out they forgive her apologies and let her sleep in peace.

 

Mounragi rage is at the bottom of her heart. People around her are at peace but her eyes remain closed but we should all remember her heart still beats and her apologies that she said to them.

 

Years have passed and Maungarei is surrounded by houses. After all this she is still sleeping. But you might not know that she can erupt again.

 

Time Traveller’s Podcast ft Samuel Marsden

For Literacy we have been using our Inquiry knowledge to help us write questions that we might have asked Reverend Samuel Marsden had we had the chance to meet him and talk to him. This was a fun activity because we took on the roles of Samuel Marsden and the Time Traveller’s Podcast team. It was like we experienced actually meeting him.

We learned that when you are recording a podcast expression is everything! It makes what we have to say more engaging.

Pepeha

LI: To let others know who I am so they can make connections to me and my place in the world.

 

Our challenge today was to write and record our pepeha to introduce ourselves.

I found this challenging because I don’t know how to speak Maori and i am a different culture so my pronunciation was not at standards.

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